Tuesday, November 15, 2011

dialect journal 40, pg. 187

Tree Trunk with moss.

The tree trunk was blown over in a storm. Just like Hester has her sin. The Moss hides the tree from showing that the storm blew it over. It is comfort for it. I think the forest is hesters moss. It hides her from the meanness from the society. The same could go for dimmsdales too. The forest saves him from the storm in the town.

1 comment:

  1. Okay - there is some idea that could be interesting here. You need to reword/rewrite this paragraph for clarity.

    Example: This what you say in the first two sentences:
    The tree was blown over just like Hester has here sin?

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